Some people think new homes need to be built with private outdoor space such as a garden, yard, or balcony. Do you think this is more advantageous or more disadvantageous?

• In our modern life, the majority of individuals believe that

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new

homes

need to be built with personal outside areas

such

as a backyard, yard or veranda. I strongly believe that

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there are a lot of advantages than disadvantages

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because it is one of the

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greatest ways of living

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house with

garden

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and

balcony

. In

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essay, I will discuss both pros and cons of constricting all

homes

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,

backyard

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and yards. • There

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number

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of significant benefits of living

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with

balcony

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.

First

of all, it is one of the best

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to have

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breakfast, lunch and dinner with their family

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the fresh air.

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that, if they live

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house with

yard

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, inhabitants are able to play football and volleyball with their friends and their families, it is the best way to spend their time with their close people like family and friends.

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in many European countries,

such

as Italy many buildings are constricting with

balcony

, gardens and backyards

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because

this type

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of

homes

are extremely comfortable

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live and

this

country's government try to create opportunities for their citizens. • Turing to the other side of the argument despite its benefits it

also

has, it is advantages.

First

of all, if the government constricted all

homes

without

balcony

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, gardens and yards, they are able to

building

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many

homes

instead

of houses with

balcony

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there are many individuals

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live

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there easily and it is one of the best ways to relax. • In conclusion, having weighed everything mentioned

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and I can come to

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conclusion that, nowadays many people prefer to living a house with

garden

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or

balcony

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because there are a lot of opportunities for humans to live with their family and friends. From my point of view, it is

greatest

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way for the village citiz