Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find ur difficult to get a university education. University should make it easier for such groups to enrol. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The graph provides information about the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010. Overall, in
the
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1930 the biggest proportion of working society was in farming, fishing and foresting.
In contrast
to
this
in
2010
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the biggest number of employees was in the industrial
sector
, while the farming industry dropped to the bottom. In 1930 the most popular
sector
was farming, almost
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of people worked in
this
area. The difference between the
first
and
second
popular sectors was so massive. The
second
most popular
sector
was other offices.
However
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the difference between the remaining sectors is not so huge. From
this
year the percentage of workers in the farming industry had slightly dropped. Everything
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changed in 1990. When the industrial and farming sectors had the same proportion of workers. Nowadays the number of workers in the industry
sector
is the biggest in the market. The
second
by popularity area is technical. And the least popular is farming.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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