For centuries, importan parts of education have remained such reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to added to the list. to what extent do you agree?

For ages,in terms of education curriculum subjects
such
as math,writing and reading plays crucial roles in the
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society
.It is undeniable that
computers
have become an essential part of our life.
Nevertheless
,some people believe that computer skills should
also
become
mandatory
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subject in the advancement.Personally,I am in
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of the notion that computer skills should be added to the list.
Firstly
,
computers
have made our lives much easier and more efficient.admittedly,students can take advantage of
computers
to assist their
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studies
.It is
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perceptible
perceivable
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that there are a lot of
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available
resources
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any information that
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pupils
can access if they are
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skilful
skillfully
at
computers
. There
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myriad
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,
for
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videos on youtube or social media
as well as online libraries
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, as well as online libraries,
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provide instinct information from
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ancient
books.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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