Some people believe that visitor to other countries should follow local customs and behavior, others disagree and think that the host country welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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films

.Well,the most

films

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like is detectives and dramatics.I prefer watching

films

at home because you can do it in

comfortable

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environment and do what you want, how you like.I agree with

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because when you read you can imagine the scenes how you want and

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of the actors yourself.

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you watch

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and see the way how

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sees and

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this

. What did you like the most there? If you had a chance, would you go back there? How long was your trip? I’m sorry I have to go now

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because my mom is waiting for me. Best wishes, Nastya

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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