Some people believe that visitor to other countries should follow local customs and behavior, others disagree and think that the host country welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Dear Jane, Thank you for your letter.It was great to hear from you. You asked me about
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.Well,the most
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, that
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like is detectives and dramatics.I prefer watching
films
at home because you can do it in
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environment and do what you want, how you like.I agree with
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because when you read you can imagine the scenes how you want and
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of the actors yourself.
Then
you watch
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and see the way how
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sees and
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this
. What did you like the most there? If you had a chance, would you go back there? How long was your trip? I’m sorry I have to go now
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because my mom is waiting for me. Best wishes, Nastya
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