IN THE FUTURE ROBOTS WILL DO MORE AND MORE JOBS INSTEAD OF HUMANS. DOES THIS DEVELOPMENT HAVE MOREADVANTAGES OF DISADVANTAGES?
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lifes
of people are getting more convenient compared to the past. Technological boom is apparently influencing humankind's live styles and performances. Correct your spelling
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This
leads to the phenomenon that furtherly robots
will replace people's work
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this
concept and explore reasons and examples of
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To begin
with, if a person's activity is replaced by the
technology in the future, Correct article usage
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the
society will lose Correct article usage
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their
jobs. The reason is that all occupations could be programmed in automation so no need for manual workers. Correct pronoun usage
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For instance
, drivers, receptionists in hotels or cashiers in groceries could lose their work places
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these kind
of jobs can be automated. Change the determiner
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along with
themselves.
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Secondly
, it is a danger if population's
jobs will be taken by robotic devices due to Correct article usage
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the
IT intelligence is just a machine with written IT codes. Correct article usage
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For example
,although
smart IT intelligent robots
are set up for working without negative consequences, the device sometimes has drawbacks such
as inability
to analyse and fix problems by themselves .Correct article usage
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work
can be an issue for operation
and folks' lives.
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robots
will take over individuals' workplaces. While robots
are working instead
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work
vacancies and can not meet their lives demands. Moreover
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drawbacks,all automated robots
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