IN THE FUTURE ROBOTS WILL DO MORE AND MORE JOBS INSTEAD OF HUMANS. DOES THIS DEVELOPMENT HAVE MOREADVANTAGES OF DISADVANTAGES?

Nowadays due to

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technological advancement and varied developed devices

lifes

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of people are getting more convenient compared to the past. Technological boom is apparently influencing humankind's live styles and performances.

This

leads to the phenomenon that furtherly

robots

will replace people's

work

.

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disadvantages

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of

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concept and explore reasons and examples

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it.

To begin

with, if a person's activity is replaced by

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technology in the future,

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society will lose

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jobs. The reason is that all occupations could be programmed in automation so no need for manual workers.

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, drivers, receptionists in hotels or cashiers in groceries could lose their

work places

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workplaces

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since

these kind

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of jobs can be automated.

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,

consequently

, the community will strive for making

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ends meet in order to support their families

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themselves.

Secondly

, it is a danger if

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jobs will be taken by robotic devices due to

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IT intelligence is just a machine with written IT codes.

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if

this

programme is broken it could cause a potential danger to

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since there are no humans who can control and prevent unexpected flaws

of

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the machinery.

For example

,

although

smart IT intelligent

robots

are set up for working without negative consequences, the device sometimes has drawbacks

such

as

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to analyse and fix problems by themselves .

Therefore

, any incidents during

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of

work

can be an issue for

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and folks' lives. To conclude, in present days nobody can complete their

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tasks without

assistance

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of

technologies

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.Due to

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IT development,

currently

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everything is getting automated. So there are some future predictions that

robots

will take over individuals' workplaces. While

robots

are working

instead

of persons ,

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will lose their wages due to the shortage of

work

vacancies and can not meet their lives demands.

Moreover

, incidents could

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during the operation since mistakes could be followed by

robots

' performances.So, in order to eradicate

such

drawbacks,all automated

robots

should

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thoroughly and several times.