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IN THE FUTURE ROBOTS WILL DO MORE AND MORE JOBS INSTEAD OF HUMANS. DOES THIS DEVELOPMENT HAVE MOREADVANTAGES OF DISADVANTAGES?

#future #robots #jobs #humans #development #moreadvantages
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Nowadays due to
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technological advancement and varied developed devices
lifes
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 of people are getting more convenient compared to the past. Technological boom is apparently influencing humankind's live styles and performances.
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 leads to the phenomenon that furtherly
robots
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 will replace people's
work
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.
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disadvantages
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the disadvantages
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 of
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technology in the future,
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society will lose
their
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 jobs. The reason is that all occupations could be programmed in automation so no need for manual workers.
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, drivers, receptionists in hotels or cashiers in groceries could lose their
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work places
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workplaces
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 since
these kind
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 of jobs can be automated.
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,
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, the community will strive for making
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ends meet in order to support their families
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themselves.
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, it is a danger if
population's
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 jobs will be taken by robotic devices due to
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IT intelligence is just a machine with written IT codes.
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 if
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 programme is broken it could cause a potential danger to
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 since there are no humans who can control and prevent unexpected flaws
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 the machinery.
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,
although
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robots
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 are set up for working without negative consequences, the device sometimes has drawbacks
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 to analyse and fix problems by themselves .
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, any incidents during
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 of
work
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 can be an issue for
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 and folks' lives. To conclude, in present days nobody can complete their
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tasks without
assistance
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the assistance
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 of
technologies
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.Due to
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IT development,
currently
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 everything is getting automated. So there are some future predictions that
robots
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 will take over individuals' workplaces. While
robots
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 are working
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 of persons ,
ones
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 will lose their wages due to the shortage of
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 vacancies and can not meet their lives demands.
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 during the operation since mistakes could be followed by
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' performances.So, in order to eradicate
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 drawbacks,all automated
robots
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 should
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 thoroughly and several times.
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