The column is showa the results of a survey about peoples coffee

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The column graph below illustrates the results of a survey about people's different types of drink purchasing and their drinking routine in five different cities which are located in Australia namely

Sydney

, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart. A cursory glance at the graph is enough to make it clear that 60% of

Sydney

residents

went to a cafe for drinks in the

last

4 weeks, but only half of Adelaide

residents

went to a cafe for drinks

such

as coffee or tea in the

last

4 weeks. 45% of

Sydney

residents

bought instant coffee in the

last

4 weeks, but only just below 45% of people who are dwelling in

Sydney

bought fresh coffee in the

last

month. The highest percentage of those who went to a cafe for drinks belongs to Melbourne

residents

which

are

Correct subject-verb agreement

show examples

nearly 65%.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

138 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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The column is showa the results of a survey about peoples coffee

Include an introduction and conclusion

In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impacts of aging population

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this .

Some people think there is no need for professional photographers as everybody knows how to click pictures. What is your opinion? Include any relevant personal experience and knowledge

in many countries around the world ,rural people are moving to cities,so the population in the countryside is decreasing. do you think this is a positive or a negative development?