These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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Nowadays, commonly used personal computers and

telephone

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enable people to work on their

jobs

more conveniently at

home

However

, there are both pros and cons

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working at

home

. Whilst acknowledging the drawbacks,

this

essay will argue that the advantages overweigh the disadvantages. Let’s begin by looking at the advantages of doing

jobs

home

. One of the main positives is that

this

way can provide people with more free

time

. What I mean by

this

is that working at

home

enables people to waste less

time

, while avoiding some unnecessary troubles at the same

time

For example

, when

accident

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an accident

the accident

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occurs, like if his baby got a cold, one who

work

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home

doesn’t have to specially apply for a break and

thus

waste

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time

job

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the job

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This

definitely

provide

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great convenience. Another advantage is that, for some

jobs

that have uncertain worktime. Working at

home

will be a more reasonable arrangement.

For instance

, an engineer who is responsible for looking after the server of an international country,

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can definitely be able to make

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better use of

time

when not needed. Yet, from the opposite

side

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we can see drawbacks in applying working at

home

. Without the company of colleagues in the office, one may feel alone and

thus

lack the passion to finish his job. For some

jobs

like editors or doctors, working at

home

may even bring them inconvenience, dealing with their job at

workplace

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the workplace

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will be a more efficient way

instead

. All things considered,

although

doing

jobs

home

have

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has

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drawbacks like loneliness, it brings advantages

such

as more flexible work

time

and

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a better

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better organized

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schedule. Overall I believe, the positive side of working

home

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at home

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overweigh the negative side.

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3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

284 words

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These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Fully explain your ideas

In modern times, young adults are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occured? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?

All large companies should provide sports and social facilities to the local community. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people say that it is better to work for a large company than a small one. Do you agree or disagree

In many countries today, crime novel and TV crime dramas are becoming more popular. Why do you think are these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?