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We Are Becoming Increasingly Dependent On Computers. How do you think it will change in the future? is it good for us rely so much on computer?

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Evidence suggests that computer-based
technology
 has become an integral part of life
as a result
 we totally rely on it.
Although
this
 phenomenon creates a lot of problems in our existence and the following paragraph would highlight my perspective which leads to a logical conclusion.
To begin
 with, computer-based techniques are spreading everywhere and humans are using them as a matter of concern.
For instance
, we use various
machines
 like washing
machines
 to wash clothes, grinding
machines
 to grind materials and sewing
machines
 to sew clothes, all of these based on cutting-edge
technology
.
Thus
 in future, we will depend on robots for our household work.
Besides
,
this
technology
 works wonders in the department of communication and people become social animals, to socialize, they are using social media which is changing day by day and
thus
 all these changes are only possible due to the extraordinary nature of computers. Moving
further
, depending on
this
 cutting-edge
technology
 creates a lot of issues in our lives.
For example
, a person works in an IT company, he spends most of his working hours in front of screens and now he is suffering from eye-sight failure.
Moreover
, youngsters are connecting with each other on social media and their daily attraction to other people is almost lost which produces a sense of loneliness.
This
 condition causes depression and anxiety in youth. To recapitulate, we cannot ignore the wonderful usage of
technology
,
on the other hand
,it
also
 causes a lot of problems in the life of adults and these drawbacks far outweighed the advantages.
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