Success in business can be assured if you have great marketing and promotion. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some people believe successful

business

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businesses

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can be measured by the marketing and

promotion

campaign

that they make. In my opinion, great marketing is not the only thing that

define

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success in

business

. Certain reasons regarding

this

will

be

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be further explained

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further

explain in the essay.

First

of all, there are several aspects that need to be seen to consider a successful

business

. One of the essential factors is the happiness of their employees. Good

business

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businesses

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will put their

employees

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matters

first

because the key to

achieve

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the

business

goals is followed by creating a good team. To illustrate, if a cafe

want

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wants

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to gain more

customers

, they have to train their waiter and waitress to give

a

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good service.

Thus

, the waiter and waitress

team work

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will be the

first

thing to assure.

Secondly

,

great

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advertisement will not yet define the profit gain of one

business

. A

business

may have

interesting

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an interesting

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promotion

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promotions

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, but if

this

cannot make

customers

buy the product,

then

it is unlikely to get more

sells

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.

For example

,

heartwarming

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a heartwarming

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campaign

by Burger King

when

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during when

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pandemic

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the pandemic

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happens said to their

customers

to buy

another brands

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another brand

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of fast food

,

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so that similar fast food businesses will remain

throught

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through

throughout

pandemic

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the pandemic

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.

This

is a great

campaign

from Burger King but

in

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at

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the same time

have

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risk. They make their

customers

respect the brand more, but they cannot assure

wheter

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whether

their

customers

will buy more or choose another brand. Another reason, when a

business

make

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great

promotion

and marketing. It

also

needed to look at the impacts

in

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on

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the

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society. Is it gives good impacts or bad impacts

.

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For

an

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illustration,

spunbond

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spun-bond

bag as a

campaign

related to

go

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green may not be the best

campaign

. Because the negative side according to

this

will make

customers

have a big

compile

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of spunbond bags which may not be

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in the future. To conclude, great marketing and

promotion

may become one of the significant

aspect

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aspects

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of a successful

business

, but it is not the only factor. Other factors

such

as the happiness of the employees and the real profit gain are the other two important matters.