you are going to another country to study. you would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. write a letter to this friend. in your letter. give detail of your study plans. explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

dear Kamyar I am just

writting

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writing

to let you know that

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im

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I'm

going to

newyork

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new york

to study

master

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of construction in your

neighborhood

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neighbourhood

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. my university

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is open

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open

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opens

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next

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month and in

this

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course

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i

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I

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should go to university twice a week and

i

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I

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will learn how to use AUTOCAD in civil engineering and

i

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I

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have paid 10000

dollares

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dollars

for each year. As you know Newyork is

high-maintenance

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a high-maintenance

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city

thus

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i

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I

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should work long hours to make ends meet. I think if

i

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I

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had a

job

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,

i

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will pay the rent of my condo and

i

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can buy food for myself ,

although

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my

familly

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family

support me,

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im

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I'm

reluctant to get money from my parent.

unfortunatly

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unfortunately

i

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I

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have no access to

job

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opportunity

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opportunities

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in your country so

you

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it

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can be very helpful if you can send my resume to

great

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a great

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number

for

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of

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the company

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company

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in your hometown. it would be better to find a

job

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related to my major because

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im

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I'm

it

really professional in structure and dam building

besides

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im

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a good

trouble shooter

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too, so

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im

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I'm

usefull

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useful

to

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in

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coordinating

the

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apply

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stuff.

its

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it's

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your

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you're

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kindness if you try to find a

job

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for me. see you soon SAED TAVAZOIE