You have recently opened up a shop in your area and as an advertisement campaign. You would like to send a letter to all potential customers. Introduce your shop Introduce your services And offer a special discount for the new customers. Write your letter in an appropriate style and format in 150 words on your answer sheet.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I've always been a little leery of proclaiming anything "the best".I never declared anyone my best friend as a kid because I was afraid my other friends might assume I thought less of them.So,it was a little difficult for me to come up with just one "best" advertisement of all time-which is why there are 18 in
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to hit on some universal truth that allows us to remember these campaigns years after they first began.In fact, some of us might not have even been alive when these campaigns first aired.But to know what makes an advertisement great, you first need to know how an advertisement is defined.
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Yours faithfully,
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task achievement
Your letter needs to reflect the purpose more clearly. Focus on introducing your shop, its services, and the special discount offered.
coherence cohesion
Organize your letter into separate paragraphs for the introduction, services, and special offer. This will improve the logical structure.
coherence cohesion
Use bullet points or headings if necessary to make each section of your letter clearer and more engaging for potential customers.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing phrases are appropriate and polite.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.