‏The animal species are becoming extinct ‏due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?

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In
this
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concrete ,jungle it is fact that day by day size of the
forest
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reduced drastically and
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why it has a direct impact on the wild
animals
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. Men made high-rise buildings in
forest
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areas so species lost their homes and were shown rarely. I will discuss some of the causes and their solution in ensuring paragraph.
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with, each and every person want a good lifestyle
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as a luxurious home, and smartphones among all of them people's main priority is to build a skyscraper wing so they have to remove the trees and build that space.
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, nowadays it is a trend for youngsters to eat various
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of sea foods like Fish and zinga.
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, one research conducted by The Times of India found that 75% of teenagers would prefer to take these
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of
kinds
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of seafood as compared to the past
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ratio is just 20%. While discussing the solutions to
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burning issue I found a few ways to dig out of
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matter.
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of all, the government have to implement rules on eating seafood
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areas where wild
animals
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are gone extinct and authorities can build sanctuaries so they can live comfortably. Another one is as construction sites are increasing as the same
forest
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has to be increased so these
kinds
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of things
animals
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and birds can maintain their food chain and easily live on trees or
forest
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areas. In conclusion, every coin has two sides in the same way every problem has a solution. Individuals have to prevent birds and
animals
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that are going to rare.
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