‏The animal species are becoming extinct ‏due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?

In
this
concrete ,jungle it is fact that day by day size of the
forest
reduced drastically and
that is
why it has a direct impact on the wild
animals
. Men made high-rise buildings in
forest
areas so species lost their homes and were shown rarely. I will discuss some of the causes and their solution in ensuring paragraph.
To begin
with, each and every person want a good lifestyle
such
as a luxurious home, and smartphones among all of them people's main priority is to build a skyscraper wing so they have to remove the trees and build that space.
Moreover
, nowadays it is a trend for youngsters to eat various
kinds
of sea foods like Fish and zinga.
For instance
, one research conducted by The Times of India found that 75% of teenagers would prefer to take these
kinds
of
kinds
of seafood as compared to the past
this
ratio is just 20%. While discussing the solutions to
this
burning issue I found a few ways to dig out of
this
matter.
First
of all, the government have to implement rules on eating seafood
in particular
areas where wild
animals
are gone extinct and authorities can build sanctuaries so they can live comfortably. Another one is as construction sites are increasing as the same
forest
has to be increased so these
kinds
of things
animals
and birds can maintain their food chain and easily live on trees or
forest
areas. In conclusion, every coin has two sides in the same way every problem has a solution. Individuals have to prevent birds and
animals
that are going to rare.
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