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More and more plastic waste has polluted cities ,countrysides and oceans. What problems does it cause ? And what measures can be taken.

#plastic #waste #cities #countrysides #oceans #measures
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It is irrefutable that moulded materials are causing serious damage to living,
nevertheless
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, measures should be taken to eradicate
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 problem.
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, the following paragraph would highlight my perspective which leads to a logical conclusion.
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 with, the
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 and foremost reason stems from the fact that in the modern age, people are using things which mostly contain
plastic
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 material, as a consequence, these products are spreading all over the
world
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, causing deleterious effects on the planet.
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, a recent study by the
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 Health Organization
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 that 80% of Indian cows were dead from consuming poisonous moulded items which were found everywhere in India.
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, another pivotal aspect is that junk food becomes a trending
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 of
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present
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that
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is usually served in
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 bags. By eating
this
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 food, youngsters are suffering from obesity, a serious disease which is the root of all diseases. Moving
further
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, there are myriad
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solutions8 which should be taken to improve
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 fatal situation, the most preponderant one is that awareness programs should be held to give information about the harmful effects of
plastic
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 on the globe. On other hand, universities should introduce new courses to aware the pupils about the
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 of toxins which are causing fatal diseases in humans. To recapitulate, no doubt,
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 has polluted our cities, countryside and beaches, while it could be eradicated from our environment if we held various awareness programs.
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