You recently received your grade from your instruktor and you are dissatisfied with your score. Write a letter to your instructor and - introduce yourself - let him know that you are dissatisfied with your grade. - mention the reasous to couvince him that you deserve a better grade

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing
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letter to you need to change my grades. My name is Farangiz. I am a student
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the 11th grade of the
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school. I took a
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test
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week. I have been studying
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for two years. I wrote the correct answer to all the questions on the test. I participate in
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every year. I get first place every year. I am angry because I got a low rating.
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. I think there was a
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misunderstand
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. I won a gold medal in the
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year. It seems you are
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. You should review my grades. If you do not change my grades it may affect my studies. I hope you will change my
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. Yours faithfully Qobilbayeva Farangiz.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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