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Humans are producing an increasing amount of trash everyday and the world is becoming full of the landfills we use to get rid of our trash. In your opinion, how can recycling save the environment and help the people on Earth?

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Nowadays, the number of
waste
 processing
plants
 is increasing. These factories help humanity by recycling
waste
.
otherwise
, these wastes will cause environmental pollution. Nowadays, the human population is rapidly increasing.
This
 will cause an increase in production.
Then
 more emissions can increase. We need to build recycling
plants
 to reduce the amount of
this
waste
. First of all, we need to get rid of plastic bottles. We should use paper bags
instead
 of plastic containers. Paper bags quickly turn to compost.
And plastic
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 bottles can rot for at least five hundred years. If we increase the number of
waste
 processing
plants
, the environment will be much cleaner. we can prevent the spread of various diseases. which leads to
our
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a
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 healthy adulthood. These
plants
 help prevent all kinds of bad
odors
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odours
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 from spreading. Nowadays, many factories produce quality products from
this
waste
. In
conclude
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, it is a fact that the human population will continue to rise. In order for the world’s natural resources
remain
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 sustainable, the government and the public must cooperate to find a solution to
this
 ever-present problem.
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coherence cohesion
Improve the organization of ideas to create a more cohesive structure. Ensure the introduction and conclusion address the main points and express a clear opinion on recycling and its benefits.
task response
Provide a more detailed and focused response to the prompt, offering specific examples and a more comprehensive exploration of the benefits of recycling for the environment and people on Earth.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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