The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two bar charts compare the activity of graduates and postgraduates after leaving the college with
exclusion
of full-time workers in Add an article
the exclusion
UK
in 2008.
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the UK
It is clear that
the majority of graduate and postgraduate students
had part-time jobs or continued for
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to
further
study. Additionally
, a small proportion of them did some voluntary work.
Nearly thirty thousand graduate students
enrolled in postgraduate courses after leaving colleges
. Fix the agreement mistake
college
However
, about eighteen thousand graduates were working in part-time jobs which is nearly the same number of
those who were unemployed at about sixteen thousand. Change preposition
as
Moreover
, 3500 of the graduates did voluntary work.
For postgraduates, nearly
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a nearly
similar
number of them had part-time work or doing Correct article usage
a similar
further
studies by
2535 and 2725 Change preposition
apply
students
respectively. However
, those who were not working or studying accounted for 1625 students
. Voluntary working was the least activity done by postgraduates by
only 345 Change preposition
with
students
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