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Obesity has become bigger and more global problem. What are the causes of this? and what solution can be taken to tackle these problem?

#obesity
Obesity
 among
the
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people
 across the globe is being reported to be a
problem
 of
much
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 larger magnitude in recent times. With the change in
people
's
lifestyle
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lifestyles
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 and eating
prefernces
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preferences
 over
last
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the last
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 few
decades
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 the
problem
 of being overweight is becoming increasingly common.
However
, there are possible measures that can be taken to counteract
this
problem
.
This
 essay will discuss the causes and solutions to
this
problem
 in detail.
Increasing
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 use of
automotation
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automation
 combined with the influence of Information and Technology in everyone's day-to-day lives has brought a major shift in
people
's
lifestyle
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lifestyles
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 being sedentary, which is a major cause
for
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obesity
. Most of the jobs have become desk jobs which
requires
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 sitting in front of a monitor for an extended period of time. Manual repetitive tasks involving human labour are being carried out by robots controlled from an operator station.
For example
,
the
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shop floor workers in the manufacturing industry have
a
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significant assistance from the usage of power tools and robotics that requires less manual
labor
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labour
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 to accomplish the said tasks. Nowadays, restaurant
food
 and
ready frozen
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 meals which are unhealthy in
longer
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 run are much more accessible to everyone due to the evolution of
food
 technology and
food
 delivery business models.
This
 can be exemplified by the outcome of
a
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recent research stating that outside
food
 which contains preservatives and processed ingredients is one of the major
cause
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causes
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for
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 increasing
obesity
. Adopting an active
lifestyle
 is
must
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 in order to fight the
problem
 of
obesity
 which can only be incorporated into
people
's life by their own choice. In order to promote
the
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awareness among the
people
 of the world, certain steps can be taken
such
 as organizing social events and
campaings
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campaigns
 in various
instituties
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institutions
institutes
, adding more sports and extra-curricular activities in education, organizing public exercise and yoga events, etc.
Also
, start-ups that provide fresh
food
 meal kits and vending machines should be promoted with some
goverenment
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government
 funding to be able to provide a healthy
food
 option to the
people
. In conclusion,
people
's eating habits and
inactive
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lifestyle
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lifestyles
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 are the major contributors to the increasing
problem
 of
Obesity
 around the world. Adopting a healthier
lifestyle
 by being physically active and eating healthy fresh
food
 should be incentivised to solve the global issue of
obesity
 among
the
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people
.
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