It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, thanks to

development

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the development

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of technology,

scientists

and

tourists

ave

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have

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opportunity

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the opportunity

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to go to distant

areas

such

as the South Pole.

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is in my opinion

that

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cons of

this

improvement surpass the pros.

Although

untouched sites provide a new side of investigation for

scientists

;

in addition

a

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new place to visit for

tourists

,

its

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detrimental effects on

environment

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the environment

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and

possibility

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the possibility

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of occurring dangerous events is more important.

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will be discussed in detail as follows: The primary

disadvantages

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disadvantage

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of going to faraway regions

is

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inevitable

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environmental detriment.

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is to say that since

such

areas

are usually appealing to

scientists

and

tourists

, it brings a number of people from all over the world to visit and investigate leading to producing garbages,

polluting

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and polluting

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water and air.

Moreover

, faraway

areas

might be a threat

for

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travellers.

In other words

, due to

isolation

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of

such

regions,there

is

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not adequate guidelines for travellers to follow.

For instance

,

tourists

run the risk of getting attacked by wild animals or the balance of nature can be disturbed by

activities

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the activities

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of

scientists

.

Finally

, the disadvantages are more significant.

Conversely

, travelling to distant places is a benefit for

tourists

and

scientists

as they are able to visit somewhere they have never been before.

Besides

,

scientists

would be capable of studying

on

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new

areas

. In spite of mentioned positive points, the merits

are overshadows

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are overshadowed

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by demerits. To sum up, while going to remote sites give a chance

to

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tourists

and

scientists

in terms of visiting new

areas

and exploring scientific subjects, it could

has

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negative impacts on

environment

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the environment

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and cause some troubles which totally carry more weight.