Some people believe that electronic calculators should not be allowed in school until after the pupils have mastered mental arithmetic. Others believe that calculators save pupils time, especially with complicated calculations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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small
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usually
students love to save
time
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of maths
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calculator
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that it is not good to
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until
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using
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useful
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their
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students to
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them to give
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myriad
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very difficult for normal
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students
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and exams specially for
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who
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interested in
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digital assistant .
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not only help to save
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also
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pupils to
to
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all the
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solution to solve in
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of
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we seldom give a thought to ponder over
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side of the essay not using ready reckoner is
also
very
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useful
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Moreover
, some
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tutors
do not allow their child and tutor to
use
calculators for solving sums because they feel that we can extend our thinking by not using electronic
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over daily basis .
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also
imagine that all age group people will become lazy
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because
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called
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, man/
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women
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will become dependent on
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and
electornic
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electronic
things
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also
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article published in "THE HUFFINGTON POST" 79% of the
humanbeings
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human beings
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the machine
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for
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work . Winding Up my essay every one has their own choice to solve problems some love to
use
machinery
things
while some like to solve
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their own but solving
by
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own can help our mind to get
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powerfull
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powerful
day by day.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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