It is better for young people to get the advises from old people than young ones. Do you agree or disagree?

In terms of advice, I would say yes it is better to get
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enough about what we should take even though they never experience the certain thing as what happened to us. But
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your
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had before. In
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they would bring. And will definitely Benefit your
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  • wisdom
  • insight
  • mentorship
  • holistic
  • innovate
  • generation gap
  • revered
  • guidance
  • perspectives
  • values
  • societal norms
  • diversity
  • life lessons
  • outdated
  • relevance
  • challenges
  • technological advancements
  • creativity
  • tradition
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