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Some people say that poor students or students who come from rural areas often find it difficult to have access to university education. What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer. You should write at least 250 words in this space.

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In
this
 day and age, it has become the norm for
students
 from
rural
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field
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 or people without sufficient financial resources to give up on
a
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university culture, resulting in a reduction in opportunities for
such
 individuals to find jobs with desirable salaries and to improve the quality of their lives.
Such
 unfortunate circumstances do not befall without cause and for
this
 concerning issue, there should
also
 be countermeasures, as I will humbly suggest below. Since the high cost of university
education
 is one of the major obstacles hindering some
students
 from gaining access to
college
, a reasonable cutback in
tuition
fees
 might be an effective solution to
this
 problem.
College
students
 typically have to shoulder the burden of paying for transportation, renting and other daily life necessities.
Thus
, having a considerable amount of
tuition
fees
 added to the list is undoubtedly a considerable challenge which not everyone, especially those bearing financial problems, would take. Under
such
 circumstances, downsizing the university
tuition
fees
 for impecunious
students
 would be a great encouragement for them to pursue higher
education
. Another plausible solution to provide more opportunities for rural
students
 to receive post-secondary
education
 might be to establish more
universities
 in their community. The majority of
universities
 with distinguished
reputation
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 are located in big cities.
Thus
, the trouble of having to travel long distances or live far away from home in order to attend courses might remove the option of going to
college
 from these
students
’ future plans.
Therefore
, setting up
universities
 with standardized lecturers and
curriculum
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 in rural areas would probably encourage
students
 to apply for colleges. To sum up, financial problems and a shortage of rural
universities
 are possible explanations
why
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 poor
students
 or
students
 from rural areas encounter difficulties in having access to
college
. It is,
therefore
, advisable that there should be a reduction in
tuition
fees
 for impoverished
students
 as well as the foundation of more colleges in rural areas in order to guarantee comprehensive post-secondary
education
 for anyone who wishes to receive it.
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