The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governtments should invest funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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government
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has its focus on different strategies in putting their
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either
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arts, music and
theater
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which turns to nothing while funds that
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alotted
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allotted
properly in public services
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a great outcome. Analysing the value of education as well as
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development of national
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will prove that I am agreeing with
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notion.
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, allocating
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in
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arts, music and theatre is totally a waste since people
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the
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line of physiologic needs
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as food and shelter.
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, tons of cultural
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which
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amusement
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gone
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nothing due to
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individuals patronizing
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.
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the bureaucracy
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suffered
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bancruptcy
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bankruptcy
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, once
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will allocate
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amount of
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building Universities; it would be a great form of assistance to individuals below the poverty line.
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, in
Philippines
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the Philippines
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where Education
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has the capacity of building humungous schools and
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so that
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could obtain and access
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ultimate profession that they are dreaming of.
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, the country of
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labelled
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number one in producing
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high caliber
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and successful nurses and physicians.
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, when it comes to
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national
road
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;
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must focus and attain a goal to improve every
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specifically in
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areas which primarily lack
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access to any assistance
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they badly needed especially after
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of calamities. Like, after the super typhoon that hits the central region of
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in the year 2013, many
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vanished for the reason that
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aid and assistance went
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because of road inaccessibility.
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, all forms of
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was
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taken in a snap of
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gone nothing. In summary, public services
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crucial and
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the continuity of
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rather than putting the tantamount
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nation's
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the nation's
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money
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in
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different forms of arts and music.
At
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the end,
life
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matters most compare to the material things that
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errected
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erected
in our surroundings.
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