The state ofthe environment is now a cause for concern in all countries across the world. Apart from government measures and policies, what can idividuals do on a personal level to combat the negative effect that our lifestyles have on the environment?

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Climate changes are a huge problem for every single country on
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Earth. The Government is the
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who can change it by law
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, but individuals can have an influence on the environment, too. Everyone can take action which will reduce environmental problems.
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essay will discuss two actions, which can be taken by everyone to combat the negative effects on the planet. Waste sorting is the base of the good Earth’s condition. If the waste is well sorted, it can be recycled and reused
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more time.
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is how we respect our planet and its resources. It
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has an impact on cleaner seas and oceans and
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on the health of the animals who live there. Waste sorting doesn’t take much time, but it can directly affect the improvement of the environment. The
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problem which we can be solved
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individuals is the amount of plastic in the environment which decomposes incredibly long and is toxic to the soil. When you go to the shop, choose a fabric bag
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of the plastic
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, buy water in a glass bottle or pick
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ecological wooden toothbrush and so on. A single action of
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person can’t change a
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, but if everyone changes their lifestyles and puts the good of the Earth
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instead
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of their own comfort, the huge amount of plastic will be eradicated. To conclude,
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individuals can’t do a
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, it is worth taking to take an action. Try to encourage your friends and family to think about our planet during their daily activities. It usually doesn't take a
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of time, but it can
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an enormous influence. As an
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we can’t do a
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, but as a
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we can change the world.
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