School should not force students to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

It is sometimes debated that overseas
language
should not be a compulsory subject at schools. While I agree that studying
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is advantageous for students, I
also
believe that children should not be forced to learn. On the one hand, I agree that it is beneficial for children to learn
foreign
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language
. During studying new
language
pupils can know more about the culture and society of that country.
In addition
, knowing
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second
language
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advantage in young people’s lives.
For example
, when they applied for a company if their English was good, they might make a great impression on their employee and their work could be more comfortable than the others who do not know English.
On the other hand
, I
also
believe that should not oblige students to learn
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language
. If pupils knew certainly that they do not use
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at any
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, they might not want to study it.
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, a student
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that France would not help them at all in their lives, so teachers ought to not compel them to learn. In conclusion, my view is that it would be necessary, but not
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, for children to learn
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overseas
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.
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