You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, give details of your course and your arrival/departure date explain your accommodation needs ask for information about getting to and from the college

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Chalk Bin and I am one of the students attending the training course at your college

this

summer. I am writing to acquire some information regarding accommodation at your college and the airport pick-up issue. I am a mature female student and I would like to share accommodation with other mature female students, preferably in a quiet location. I have no objection to living on campus, as long as it will not affect my studying.

In addition

, I am a non-smoker. So I would like to share accommodation with other non-smokers,

although

this

is a preference rather than a request. I will arrive in London on 25th August and the course I will attend is the computer literature sessions starting from 1st September. Since

this

is my

first

time going to London, I would appreciate it if you could kindly send someone to pick me up at Heathrow airport or at least, send me some details about how to get to the college by myself. Thank you in advance. Yours faithfully, Chalk Bin

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