Some parents bring their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this.

Nowadays, parents are spending a hefty amount on buying

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number of

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for their

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to play with. There are various advantages

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buying

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,

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disadvantages

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which cannot be overlooked.

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essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages. On the brighter side, the type of

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which are designed today help

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children

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to enhance their skills. In

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technological era,

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toys

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are getting so smart that they are helping

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kids to develop their analytical and logical skills.

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, the

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like block building,

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solving

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the mental skills of the

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, there are many families who have opted for a

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policy. In

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family

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like these

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a relationship

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relationship

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with these

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as their siblings and feel less lonely. On the darker side,

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are becoming more prone to

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sick early because of their low immunity levels.

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is generally due to the reason that

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have stopped going outside to play outdoor games, making their physical fitness level

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almost zero. The less

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active

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they are, the more the chances they have of becoming

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obese which is the main cause of many problems.

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, a study conducted by

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Oxford University has proved that

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spending more time indoors playing with their

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are more prone to many diseases like obesity.

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, the

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playing with

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of

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social interactivity with their peers. In conclusion, parents buying

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number of

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for their

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to play with, have numerous benefits.

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, the excessive use of these

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also

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bring

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many problems with them like the physical fitness,

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interactivity of the

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