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Some people say that the main enviromental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

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These days, we are facing too many ecological problems,
such
 as climate change, air
pollution
 and
pandemic
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. Some people believe that endangered species of plants and animals
is
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are
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 the main environmental problem of today's world.
However
, there are other people who
thinks
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think
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 there are more major problems
in
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with
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environment
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the environment
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.
This
 essay will discuss both these views and give a few examples according to my view. 
To begin
 with, more and more animals are
extincting
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extinct
extinction
 because of habitat
pollution
.
Although
 there are many other issues which we should concern about, we have to confirm that
this
 is a great problem
of
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in
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 our life.
On the other hand
,
extinction
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the extinction
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 of animals is one of the negative
result
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results
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 of
pollution
of
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in
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 society.
For instance
, many companies dump their waste into the lake.
Also
 the smoke from factories. These are making
pollution
to
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apply
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our environment. All in all, there are many factors of environmental
problem
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problems
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. In my view, there is a number of problems and extinct animal. It's not the main of
this
. And if we change our habitat that
ruining
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ruin
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 nature, we can solve
this
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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