Many people, nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this. Do you think is a positive or negative development.

In

this

ambitious world, Due to the development in the technology industry, a lot of people prefer to spend their leisure time using their phones, rather than spending it with their friends. In my

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, it is a negative development and I will elaborate more in the forthcoming paragraphs using lucid examples. Nowadays it is becoming so essential for everyone to carry a smartphone, but the main concern is, the duration spent

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. Some statistics show that the total hours spent a day socializing on a digital screen is more than 5 hours, and there are

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variable reasons for

this

.

Firstly

, due to the development in work fields, it is important these days to always check

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device,

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, it is easier now to check your email, send messages, and even follow up

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.

Furthermore

, some schools are using

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pads

as a way of teaching, others are now studying online using smart applications.

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what

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earlier, extremely using these devices is negatively affecting our life. Regardless

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reason

of

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using it, spending more time on your phone might

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lead to illness, especially

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and neck, because it

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requires

a lot of focusing which eventually leads to pain.

Besides

, Some children are suffering from social anxiety because of regularly use their

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which leads to less interaction with people. To sum up, smartphones made human life much easier by allowing them to access everything within seconds, but just like any other

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,

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it

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will definitely lead to unfortunate results that might affect our life and interactions with others.