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Many people, nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this. Do you think is a positive or negative development.

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In
this
 ambitious world, Due to the development in the technology industry, a lot of people prefer to spend their leisure time using their phones, rather than spending it with their friends. In my
prespectives
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, it is a negative development and I will elaborate more in the forthcoming paragraphs using lucid examples. Nowadays it is becoming so essential for everyone to carry a smartphone, but the main concern is, the duration spent
screening
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. Some statistics show that the total hours spent a day socializing on a digital screen is more than 5 hours, and there are
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variable reasons for
this
.
Firstly
, due to the development in work fields, it is important these days to always check
you
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 device,
for example
, it is easier now to check your email, send messages, and even follow up
trades
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.
Furthermore
, some schools are using
ipads
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pads
 as a way of teaching, others are now studying online using smart applications.
As a result
for
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 what
mentioned
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 earlier, extremely using these devices is negatively affecting our life. Regardless
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 using it, spending more time on your phone might
some times
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 lead to illness, especially
on
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 and neck, because it
it
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reuires
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requires
 a lot of focusing which eventually leads to pain.
Besides
, Some children are suffering from social anxiety because of regularly use their
tablet
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 which leads to less interaction with people. To sum up, smartphones made human life much easier by allowing them to access everything within seconds, but just like any other
things
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,
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it
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 will definitely lead to unfortunate results that might affect our life and interactions with others.
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