Human activity has had a negative impact on planet and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others think actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both the views and give your opinion
People have different views about the negative impact that cannot be changed actions can bring changes.
While
there are some difficulties for humans to adjust and cope with this
problem, I believe that if we take some actions the situation will get better.
It is understandable why the climate is such
a controversial topic, and there are several reasons why some people think there is nothing we can adjust. On the one hand, human developments bring some bad aftermaths to the natural environment, and the consequences are hard to fix. But there are still many countries that need to develop by using dirty energy resources, and it seems inevitable to continue damaging this
planet. On the other hand
, even in some developed countries, renewable resources are not the main energy sources. And some
research shows that developed countries have higher energy consumption, but the society there is not aware that Correct word choice
Some
this
is a critical issue.
Although
the situations
Fix the agreement mistake
situation
are
not positive right now, I still agree with the thought that we can change and improve our environment. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
First,
there are some huge improvements in the clean source area, which can lead to a more clean development of the feature. For example
, the authority can encourage companies to replace fuel with renewable sources with financial incentives. Secondly
, since environmental issues have been brought to the table, awareness of this
problem has increased. The community worldwide has started to hold continuous and conscious activities which greatly support forestation and water conservation. Finally
, putting this
topic into textbooks is the most important and meaningful thing. Protections
and conservation are not single-generation missions; they should be steady jobs. After long-term work and acting, there will be some efforts one day, and some are already seen today. So we should never give up on changing and acting.
In conclusion, even though some efforts still need to be visible, we should keep doing it, and we will change the Fix the agreement mistake
Protection
consequence
later.Fix the agreement mistake
consequences
Submitted by jiang.xintong.1997.10.23 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
coherence cohesion
Ensure a clearer introduction and conclusion that clearly address the prompt
task achievement
Provide more specific and relevant examples to support your points