Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe that it’s good to have friend who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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more effective to make
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ideas
, some other people are against it.
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friends
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of having mates same opinion bring up that it prevents discussions and fights.
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who
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ideas
on an issue may have better communication
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other. Another reason that making
friends
same opinions is that it develops
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of
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treatment
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ideas
, they might trust each other.
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, students who live
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together
have better communications thanks to their same opinions.
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seem reasonable
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the views of its supporters.
On the other hand
, those who support
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different
ideas
friends
pose that it gaines different perspectives.
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, if a person
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, his vision may grow.
In addition
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, having different
ideas
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can ensure more social skills. According to some studies, people who have
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of
friends
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private and social lives.
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are more
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way. In conclusion,
although
both views have merits, those opting to be against each other, but making different
ideas
friends
is more reasonable to me. I believe that if we keep doing
this
option, it will be better for our society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consensus
  • Divergent views
  • Echo chamber
  • Intellectual growth
  • Constructive feedback
  • Cognitive diversity
  • Perspectives
  • Challenge assumptions
  • Social cohesion
  • Conflict resolution skills
  • Broaden horizons
  • Open-mindedness
  • Reinforce beliefs
  • Homogeneous group
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