In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Constructing new
houses
in the city is not an option due to the lack of
space
, so
houses
are getting built in the
countryside
, but some
people
would like to protect that area. I would disagree with that opinion as
people
are moving to the
cities
, need
houses
and
only
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the only
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available
space
is
in
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far from the city.
Moreover
, some
families
want more
space
for their kids which is only available in the
countryside
. Nowadays,
people
from rural areas are migrating to the
cities
for
a
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better
opportunity
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opportunities
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. Due to that, the demand
of
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for
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new
homes
have
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has
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increased exponentially. Companies like to be near a major city, as they have access to all the required
insfratucture
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infrastructure
and different modes of transportation.
Infact
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In fact
, there is a high chance of finding
skill
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labour in the
cities
rather than a village and because of that
people
with the skills and
degree
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degrees
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are moving to the
cities
, who require housing. Due to
this
, new
houses
needs
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need
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to be constructed in
countryside
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the countryside
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.
For Example
, major
cities
like New York and Chicago had no
space
, so
people
started building
houses
on the outskirts, which still has
an
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accessibility to the
cities
and
its
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their
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job market.
Moreover
, some
families
want more
space
for their children to grow, so they would like to move to the
countryside
to build bigger
houses
. Due to the lack of
space
,
cities
are more
focusing
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on the
high rise
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high-rise
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reisdential
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residential
buldings
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buildings
rather than
single family
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single-family
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homes
and because of that
people
are shifting to the rural areas with more land, so
ther
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their
the
kids can have a backyard to play.
For instance
,
a
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research has shown that
families
prefer to live
little
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a little
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away from
cities
, in the
countryside
, where they have a backyard in their
homes
. In conclusion, making new
homes
in the
countryside
is a need for
the
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people
looking to
upgarde
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upgrade
their career as they need a
space
to stay, as well as for
the
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families
looking for a better upbringing
of
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their sons and daughters.
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