During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter, remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr Fring,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
letter regarding a possible job opportunity in one of your restaurants, which we discussed during our recent flight journey together.
You are busy
man, so you might not remember me. I am Vimal Thakkar and we sat Correct article usage
a busy
next
to each other during our recent journey from New York to London on November 22. I remember you mentioning about
a potential visit to one of your clients there, I believe your meeting was successful considering the knowledge you have about the food industry.
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Also
, I remember you talked about a possible role for me in one of your restaurants in New York, near the
central park. I graduated with a diploma in food science with a minor in management, so I think the role of a restaurant manager would be an ideal position for me. Correct article usage
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However
, I am also
good at supply chain management, which would make me a good candidate for any role in daily operations, such
as,
a buyer, a production planner or an inventory manager.
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further
information. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Vimal ThakkarSubmitted by vimzauthority on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
