You recently received your grade from your instructor and you are dissatisfied with your score. Write a letter to your instructor and Introduce yourself Let him know that you are dissatisfied with your grade Mention the reasons to convince him that you deserve a better grade.
Dear sir
I am Roza Bahodirova
who
attends Correct word choice
and
to
your Change preposition
apply
sport
club every day. I am writing Change the noun form
sports
this
letter Linking Words
you
to extend my requests for your judging Change preposition
to you
my
score. Recently you constituted Change preposition
of my
practical
test and I participated in. But Do you know I am disappointed Correct article usage
a practical
from
my levelChange the preposition
in
with
by
about
.
In my Change the punctuation
?
opinion
you made a mistake because Add a comma
,opinion
in
that day I made an effort in a palatable condition. Change preposition
on
Linking Words
Moreover
in Add a comma
,Moreover
running
Correct article usage
the running
test
I scored very Add an article
the test
highly
rate . So I did not perceive my scores. I am going to demand Replace the word
high
for
you Correct word choice
that
to
devote Fix the infinitive
apply
your
again Correct the word
yours
for
my grade. I hope you will evaluate my rates. Thank you for your attention.
Yours Faithfully
Roza Bahodirova.Change preposition
to
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.