These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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Nowadays, digital devices are very common in
people
’s homes and
this
provides a convenient way for
workers
to choose to
work
at
home
. As I see it, I would argue that working at
home
has more negative effects than
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one positive
ones positive
. Working at
home
brings out many benefits. The commuting time is decreased for
workers
, as more and more
people
choose to live in the suburb which means a lot of time is wasted on the way. Added to that, freedom is provided by working at
home
.
Workers
can better balance their life and
work
, like having children or elderly who
needs
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to be taken care of at
home
. In spite of these positive factors,
however
, there are a number of disadvantages. Working at
home
decreases
the
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communication with colleagues and diminishes teamwork efficiency. Most
of
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projects
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need team cooperation and when there are some problems,
workers
at
home
won’t know and fix
it
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at
the
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first
moment. More seriously,
workers
have less influence on
company
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which means when it comes to
the
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promotion, the management will
favor
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the
workers
come
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to the company more.
In addition
, working
home
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is not that comfortable
to
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workers
. It is easy to be disturbed,
for instance
,
noisy
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children, and less interaction with real
people
increase
workers
’ lonely feeling. When
people
are at
work
, others are
work around
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and it
create
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a working atmosphere
which
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people
are more
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and
efficient
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. Obviously,
home
doesn’t have
this
kind of atmosphere and
worker
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won’t be fully into
work
. To conclude,
although
there are advantages and disadvantages related to working at
home
, there are more negative impacts. Employees should
therefore
consider carefully whether working from
home
is
good
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choice.
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