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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as deser or the antarctic. What are the benefit and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

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It has been possible that just normal tourists can
visit
such
 extreme terrains as the desert or the antarctic.
This
 phenomenon has both benefits and drawbacks, and
this
 essay will discuss both sides. Considering the fact that extreme areas have hardly been open to ordinary people living in urbanized cities, the astonishment that those spots bring to them will be indescribable. Due to
this
 exotic and special experience, many tourists will definitely feel the importance of nature.
In addition
, since tourism usually makes a major contribution to the local economy, many locals who live away from cities could have a great chance to bring financial abundant in life.
For example
, the desert was not a popular tourist spot whatsoever in the past.
However
, it is now considered a very unique place to
visit
 with sandboarding and camel riding.
Thus
,
this
 phenomenon benefits not only tourists
,
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 but
also
 local people.
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages accruing from
this
 issue.
Firstly
, the reason why people could hardly
visit
 places that have extreme conditions was that they were life-threatening areas. Even though technological advances have been able to make it possible for the public to
visit
 those places safely, it does not mean that they are as safe as other tourist spots.
For instance
, there is a much higher chance of frostbite in the antarctic, no matter how insulated a jacket one may wear. As long as there is a possibility of getting indelible damage, it should be considered seriously. To sum up, though extreme areas
such
 as deserts are undoubtedly critical places, I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
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 because it is of great value that an individual can experience nature which they would never have if they had been born a hundred years earlier than they were.
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