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You recently went shopping at a department store and you were disrespected by one of the employees

#department #store #employees
Dear sir I'm writing
this
 letter
you
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 to extend my
complains
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for
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 your employees. Two days ago I went to your department
store
.l always go to your department
store
 because of the quality foods and fit objects.
Moreover
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 your
store
 is really large and very comfortable for walking in around it. But yesterday I bought a toothbrush from your department
store
. When I came home I noticed that it was broken down.
Then
 I went
to
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back to the
store
 and I demanded for altering it another one. At that moment the assistant shouted at me and said he couldn't change it. I explained
him
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 in any way you slice it but he didn't understand me. I'm only a bit sad
from
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 your assistant. I know they work all day and encounter a lot of people. I hope your assistant should be polite in the forthcoming days. Thank you for your attention. Your Faithfully. Roza Bahodirova.
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