Humans are producing an incraesing amount of trash everyday and the world is becoming full of the landfills we use to get rid of our trash. In your opinion, how can recycling save the environment and help the people on Earth?

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Person
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People
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are producing
an
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growing amount of
garbage
everyday
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and the world is becoming full of the landfills we use to get rid of our
garbage
. In my
opinion
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garbage
has become very rare these days. To keep the
environment
clean , you should never litter. Nowadays, there is a lot of trash
in
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the streets.
People
are throwing them in bins rather than in the trash.
This
is the worst habit. There is a
specila
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special
place for dumping
waste
. Should be thrown here. But those
waste
houses are
also
full of
garbage
. These wastes are very harmful to the
environment
. It has a very bad effect on
people
's lives. There are special places where
waste
is taken to
this
place and produced again the
environment
will be cleaned.
On the other hand
,
this
job
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is
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the best job. If the
garbage
is taken to a special place, the
environment
will be clean. It is not harmful to human life. But
people
are doing those
damages
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damage
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because they are throwing
garbage
on the street. Even if it is standing in front of a special
waste
room, it is not treated like that.
Waste
houses are
also
being filled.
People
are saying a lot of things. Does not appreciate them. If
people
make good use of things
instead
of throwing them away ,
waste
will
also
be reduced. The
environment
is
also
cleaned. But our president is trying his best to protect us from these harmful things. Special
waste
processing plants are being opened. Which
help
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helps
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keep the
environment
much cleaner.
Therefore
, everyone should dispose of
garbage
in special
waste
bins. It does not affect the lives of others. In conclusion, all the
garbage
should be thrown into landfills and if they do that, we can keep the
environment
clean.
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