Nowadays almost every student who graduates from high school tries to attend college or university. Why do you think people attend college or university?

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almost every student who graduates from lofty school tries to attend
college
or
university
. In my opinion, every student goes to
college
or
university
. Because they have to get
education
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and
work
after graduation. I will put my thoughts into words in the forthcoming paragraphs. Every year many students in
all
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world attend
college
or
university
. There are different reasons
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this
. All of
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these
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people try to develop themselves in
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college
. But I do not think that the time spent in
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college
is lost time. Some people go to
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college
because they like to learn. Usually
this
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these
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students continuos their education and win awards in
sciens
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science
. They have a good
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chance
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to express
a good learning possibilities
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. Nowadays, it is easy for people with fluency to find a job. In my opinion, everyone should go to school,
college
,
university
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and university
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. Because their life will be better if everything is fine. If they do not go to
college
or
university
it is very difficult to
work
there. You
also
need to read to
work
. A person who does not flow now cannot
work
. For
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, English teachers cannot
work
. Because they cannot
work
without certification. All teachers must be
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. Only
then
it will be easy for them to find a job.
That is
why you need to go to
college
or
university
. You need to learn more. In conclusion, all students need to go to
college
or
university
, because they need to study in order to
work
.
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