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Nowadays almost every student who graduates from high school tries to attend college or university. Why do you think people attend college or university?

#student #graduates #school #college #university #people
At the present
time
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 almost every student who graduates from lofty school tries to attend
college
 or
university
. In my opinion, every student goes to
college
 or
university
. Because they have to get
education
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an education
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 and
work
 after graduation. I will put my thoughts into words in the forthcoming paragraphs. Every year many students in
all
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the
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 world attend
college
 or
university
. There are different reasons
about
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this
. All of
this
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these
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 people try to develop themselves in
the
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apply
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college
. But I do not think that the time spent in
the
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apply
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college
 is lost time. Some people go to
the
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apply
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college
 because they like to learn. Usually
this
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these
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 students continuos their education and win awards in
sciens
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science
. They have a good
change
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chance
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 to express
a good learning possibilities
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good learning possibilities
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. Nowadays, it is easy for people with fluency to find a job. In my opinion, everyone should go to school,
college
,
university
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and university
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. Because their life will be better if everything is fine. If they do not go to
college
 or
university
 it is very difficult to
work
 there. You
also
 need to read to
work
. A person who does not flow now cannot
work
. For
examples
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, English teachers cannot
work
. Because they cannot
work
 without certification. All teachers must be
certification
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. Only
then
 it will be easy for them to find a job.
That is
 why you need to go to
college
 or
university
. You need to learn more. In conclusion, all students need to go to
college
 or
university
, because they need to study in order to
work
.
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