MORE AND MORE PEPLE TODAY ARE VISITING EXTREME PLACES SUCH AS ANTARCTICA OR THE SAHARA DESERT. WHAT ARE THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF SUCH TRAVES?

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Nowadays, every human-beings like to explore

such

places

in which the weather is quite different from their surroundings.

Also

, visiting some

places

like, Antarctica or the Sahara Desert has its own benefits and drawbacks too. In

this

essay, I will discuss both the positive as well as negative sides of visiting

such

kinds of

places

first

and foremost, by visiting extreme

places

, each and every individual can explore different nature and cultures as well. It

also

helps to boost their knowledge about

such

kinds of

places

Moreover

, they can learn how to survive in different climates.

For instance

, every year, more and more people like to visit some cold

places

at their weekends because they want to know more about that particular place and by visiting these types of

places

, they can learn numerous things.

Furthermore

, by exploring those

places

, they meet different people who are

also

from

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different

culture

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a person

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can learn different languages.

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, there are

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benefits to visiting for

such

travel.

On the other hand

, it has some downsides too.

For example

, sometimes, changing weather can affect one’s health.

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, if

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immune system is quite poor,

then

there will be a chance to occur some diseases like colds

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because

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weather is completely different so it does not suit everyone. Agglomerating all the above points elaborated, I would like to conclude that there is an ocean of benefits to exploring extreme

places

like Antarctica or the Sahara Desert.

However

, it has some limited drawbacks

also

, but it has more advantages than downsides because it helps to grab knowledge about a different culture.

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