Many people think it is better for the students to have a part-time job while they are studying.
Nowadays many students have a
part
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part-time
time
job
while they are studying. I believe that it is better for us as students to have a job
for many reasons that I will show in this
essay.
To start with, having part
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part-time
time
job
will help you to manage your time
. For instance
, if you used to manage your time
between work and study it will be easier for you in the future, to make it more clear, when you get married and have kids you will need to manage your time
for both sides
. Moreover
, having part
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part-time
time
job
will make you gain a lot of skills and good experiences that you are in need for
in the futureChange preposition
of
,
if you start working now after graduation you will be ready for Remove the comma
apply
the
Correct article usage
a
full
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full-time
time
job
. Although
everything in life has two sides
. having part
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part-time
time
job
while studying may affect you on some sides
, such
as difficulties in having free time
, you will not have enough time
to hang out with your friends or your family. But again having a part
Add a hyphen
part-time
time
job
will help you in many ways. Such
as you will have your own money so you will be able to pay for your courses without worrying about your family if
they can pay for you or not.
To sum up, having Correct word choice
apply
part
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part-time
time
job
is a good thing but you need to have a look at the
both Remove the article
apply
sides
before you go to apply for a job
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite