Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centers, while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, many individuals have their own

transport

to fulfil their needs of travelling and it leads to traffic problems. Some people argue that the figure of owned vehicles should be decreased in the town,

while

others think that it is an impossible solution.

This

essay will discuss both views and provide my opinion related to the prohibition of using private shipment in city centres.

To begin

with, it is undeniable that the use of privately engined vehicles causes traffic jump because the total of

transport

is as many as humans.

Moreover

, on busy days, people tend to work in a hurry and

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results in an increase in the

statistic

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of motorized

shipment

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used on the roads.

Therefore

, to solve

this

kind of problem, commuting by public

transport

will be the alternative way to reduce the traffic jump.

For instance

, using a bus to travel short distances or using a train to farther destinations.

Thus

, it will

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the problem of congestion in cities.

Subsequently

, it is generally believed that reducing the sum of commuters is

such

a crazy idea

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since public

transport

cannot help them in their daily life to travel faster.

Besides

, the rapid growth of the population in a particular area is a demand for private cars or bikes.

For example

, each family member might work in dissimilar places or go to different schools.

This

is great evidence of the importance of owned vehicles over public commuters.

However

, the available means of public

transport

may meet the needs of society and provide them with a desirable service, since the costs are extremely cheap compared to private commuters.

To sum up

, in my opinion,

although

private cars or motorcycles can ease society in travelling, the available public

transport

may be a better choice to go to many places as there will be busses or trains which can help them to travel either short trips or long trips with cheaper costs.