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In the past lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach.

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Nowadays, new inventions are widely used in many spheres of life
such
 as studying and teaching compared to the ways of teaching in the past. Since the world is changing
everyday
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 new
technoligies
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technologies
 help humanity with giving and taking information clearly and comfortably.
However
, it might have
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 impact on
health
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 of
students
. There are two main benefits of using technologies in studies.
First
 of all, technology allows provide access to educational
resourses
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resources
 and gives
freshmans
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freshmen
freshman
 the opportunity to take information in understandable form without any unnecessary materials.
Students
 could use technologies for both main or additional
sourse
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source
sources
course
 of information. Being able to watch and participate in lectures online and studying on online platforms is еще один серьезный эдвантэдж one of the benefits.
On the other hand
, using new devices may have
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 influence on
students
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Firstly
, it is believed that using devices
such
 as
smart phones
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, computers,
laptops
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 on a daily basis may have
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 on health. Most of the time
students
 are likely to have vision and posture problems. Large numbers of
students
 are diagnosed with astigmatism, myopia, scoliosis and more. All in all, the old methods of teaching as lectures are still relevant today.
However
, every teacher uses
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 method
that is
 comfortable for him, whether it is lectures or online platforms or meetings.
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