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Many countries are experiencing serious problems with their environment, with pollution of their land, water and air. What are these problems and how might they be reduced?

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over the years, many
people
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 around the world have faced
pollution
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 problems, these things were giving substantial damage to the environment and themselves.
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 some
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 still working to find the solution to
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 problem.
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 has several causes of increasing
pollution
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.
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 as waste from factories not being handled properly,
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 hazardous chemicals causing damage to the air,water and land.
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, the other cause is CO2 which is generated from fuel that uses for vehicles. at the same time, plastic material that
people
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 use on a daily basis is involved in the increase of
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, as
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 know,
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 give risks to health.
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,
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 on
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 earth have obligation to reduce
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.
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, using eco-friendly materials and doing upcycling on a daily basis. during
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 time, scientists found natural materials to replace plastics.
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 as the use of waste from rice straw and essential seaweed
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 material processed and be used for paper plates.
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, electric cars can be the
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 solution to decreasing
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 because electric cars do not release greenhouse gases. in summary, restoring the environment damaged is a substantial task, but if all of the
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 on earth do it together, the consequent for
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 will be great.
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Word Count

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Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ecosystem
  • sustainable
  • renewable energy
  • carbon footprint
  • emissions
  • deforestation
  • conservation
  • biodiversity
  • regulatory standards
  • composting
  • urban sprawl
  • green technologies
  • environmental degradation
  • waste management
  • pollutants
  • non-biodegradable
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