Some people believe women are better leaders than men. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Deciding on who leads better – males or females has been a highly

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issue for the past decades. Some people believe more in female leaders,

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support only males. I partially agree with both. While I understand the rationale behind these opinions, I feel that being a leader largely depends on personal qualities and intellect, rather than

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gender. Certainly, it could be argued that

women

are stronger leaders than

men

due to their better development

interpersonal

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skills.

For instance

, their verbal communication and body language in general

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a lot more impressive than that of the

men

.

In addition

, they

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attuned to the feelings of the people around them and relate to people in

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a way that makes them unforgettable and irresistible. Evident examples are Rosa Parks who inspired the civil movement and led to the defeat of racism;

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Indira Gandhi, who fought not only for the establishment of peace and liberation of

women

in her country.

Women

have proved that they can not only lead well but are history-making politicians.

However

, these

women

succeeded because of their intelligence and perseverance, and not because of their gender.

Men

,

on the other hand

, have proven throughout the history of civilization that they deserve the right to be called successful leaders.

However

,

similarly

to their female counterparts, they got that privilege because of their qualities of

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courage, vision and commitment. It has been argued for centuries that

men

have certain inherent features

such

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and resilience. Regardless of certain scientific evidence supporting

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argument,

women

have proved

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and

therefore

, are equal to

men

.

Nevertheless

, even in our times significantly bigger numbers of

men

tend to appear in leading positions

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women

. And one explanation

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this

could be social and cultural factors. In certain

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males have always had more freedom to dedicate themselves to their careers, while

women

have had to choose the lifestyle

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on them or dictated by families.

As a result

, in almost 195 states all over the

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only 30% of countries are led by female politicians. To conclude, regardless of the social difference, I strongly believe that being a good leader is defined by

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character and strong will and not by

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gender.