Some people are of the opinion that there should be a car free day every month, on which no private vehicles are allowed on the road. Discuss the advantages and possible disadvantages.

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that there should be one day in a month in which no one

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allowed to use private vehicles

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road

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and that day should be called

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car free

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day . It has been

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spread around us .

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, not using

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help people to save

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of pupils by walking

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and not keeping health properly .

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, not using private

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on time in daily routine .

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get down by using

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system because

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are ample

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people who travel in small

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to say money .

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but not the Least , having

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motorized things can help a person to be independent and it

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gives privacy and safety . To Cite an Example , 95% of foreign man/woman use

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to go anywhere in their own way by not depending on others and it

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safety to stay at

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time inside it .

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to conclude , it can be seen that there are more

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benefits

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of people

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cars to

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get

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society .

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

389 words

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