Some people are of the opinion that there should be a car free day every month, on which no private vehicles are allowed on the road. Discuss the advantages and possible disadvantages.
It is an undeniable fact that each
aand
every citizen of Correct your spelling
and
country
Correct article usage
the country
love
to ride their own vehicle Correct subject-verb agreement
loves
instead
of using public
transport system . Add an article
the public
Few
individuals Correct article usage
A few
says
that there should be one day in a month in which no one Change the verb form
say
i
allowed to use private vehicles Change the capitalization
I
in
Change preposition
on
road
and that day should be called Add an article
the road
as
Correct your spelling
a
car free
day . It has been Add a hyphen
car-free
clamied
that every person has their own right to live . Along with numerous Correct your spelling
claimed
benifits
, there are Correct your spelling
benefits
lot
of drawbacks which are explained in Change the article
a lot
further
essay . In fact , I completely agree with Correct article usage
a further
this
statement .
Discussing the merits . the First
and Foremost one is that our environment will be cleaned a lot if we do not use things which are runied
by Correct your spelling
run
pertol
and diesel . Correct your spelling
petrol
Furhtermore
, vehicle release Correct your spelling
Furthermore
plethotra
of gas by which different Correct your spelling
plethora
type
of Fix the agreement mistake
types
disease
spread around us . Fix the agreement mistake
diseases
In Addition
, not using car
can Add an article
a car
the car
also
help people to save their
money as well it Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
help them to fullfill
their family Correct your spelling
fulfil
members
dreams and get time for the kith Change noun form
members'
member's
an
Correct your spelling
and
kins
. Fix the agreement mistake
kin
Nonetheless
, it will also
help to stop risk
of accidents and it will Add an article
the risk
also
improve health
of pupils by walking Add an article
the health
instead
of using fourwheelers
. Correct your spelling
four-wheelers
four wheelers
For Instance
, as per latest
article published in "THE HUFFINGTON Correct article usage
the latest
POST
" 70% of human beings see fetal death because of Add a comma
,POST
accident
and not keeping health properly .
Fix the agreement mistake
accidents
On the contrary
, there are some demerits of not using Correct article usage
an automobile
automobile
. Fix the agreement mistake
automobiles
Moreover
, not using private transports
can Fix the agreement mistake
transport
also
be the main reason not
Change preposition
for not
Fix the infinitive
to be
be
on time in daily routine . Wrong verb form
being
Additionally
, your health can also
get down by using public
system because Add an article
the public
a public
their
are ample Replace the word
there
of
people who travel in small Change preposition
apply
space
to say money . Fix the agreement mistake
spaces
Last
but not the Least , having a
motorized things can help a person to be independent and it Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
also
gives privacy and safety . To Cite an Example , 95% of foreign man/woman use car
to go anywhere in their own way by not depending on others and it Add an article
the car
a car
also
provide
safety to stay at Change the verb form
provides
same
time inside it .
Add an article
the same
Thus
to conclude , it can be seen that there are more benifts
of not using private things and Correct your spelling
benefits
ample
of people Correct article usage
an ample
by
cars to Change preposition
in
ge
attention Correct your spelling
get
by
society .Change preposition
from
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