Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In about 300 words, give examples to support your ideas.

Nowadays, commercial campaigns reach a lot of
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technology world
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individuals' daily life. A number of
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community
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whereas
, others support that advertising is so prevalent that individuals no longer pay attention to it. From my perspective, there are many reasons why it
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a major
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people
's shopping decision in today's
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. To start with, the most important aspect of
commercials
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people
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. Individuals are exposed to
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thousands of
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publicity that are
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every
. There is no doubt that they affect these advertisements because big advertisers
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society
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that these brands are
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for them.
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,
people
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. For
this
reason,
commercials
determine
people
's purchasing habits.
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companies to increase their revenues. Each
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have a profit target. They benefit
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to reach
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these goals.
For example
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people
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on
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consumers.
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