You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbor Mr. Smith complained. Write a formal letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

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Dear

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Smith, I am writing

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letter to offer my sincerest apologies and in reference to the complaint

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the loud music from my flat. I had a birthday party yesterday and it did not go as planned. It was not my intention to disturb you and your family, because of the loud music from the speakers. The occasion was for my 18th birthday and I wanted to celebrate it at my flat. I believe the situation resulted from the fact I did not foresee the date and how many people I would invite. I realize that I should have organized it better. I understand how annoying it has been for you. I seek your forgiveness and I promise

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will not happen again in the future. Once again, please accept my sincerest apologies. Yours sincerely, Miroslav Zdravkov Rangelov

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6 paragraphs

140 words

5.50

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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