You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbor Mr. Smith complained. Write a formal letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

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Smith, I am writing

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the loud music from my flat. I had a birthday party yesterday and it did not go as planned. It was not my intention to disturb you and your family, because of the loud music from the speakers. The occasion was for my 18th birthday and I wanted to celebrate it at my flat. I believe the situation resulted from the fact I did not foresee the date and how many people I would invite. I realize that I should have organized it better. I understand how annoying it has been for you. I seek your forgiveness and I promise

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will not happen again in the future. Once again, please accept my sincerest apologies. Yours sincerely, Miroslav Zdravkov Rangelov

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You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbor Mr. Smith complained. Write a formal letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some believe that money for education should mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better spent on teachers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

New coverage about violent crime frightens people and encourages criminals. Therefore, some people believe this type of news should not be reported in newspapers or shown on TVs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, plastic shopping bags are the main type of rubbish. They cause water and land pollution, so they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the purpose of education is to make individuals useful to society, while others think that education should help people pursue personal ambitions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In some areas of US, a "curfew" is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors after a particular time at night unless they are with an adult. what is your opinion about this?