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some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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Some nations more and more are keen on the past of accommodation they dwell in.
This
 essay will review a few reasons why current
homeholders
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homeowners
 do it.
First
 and foremost, investing a great deal of money in a new shack a buyer wants to be aware of
what
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the condition of a
house
is
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.
Therefore
, they can count how much money they will need to pour into it in the future.
Secondly
, a lot of people are superstitious.
For instance
, for those who believe in the good or bad spirit of
places
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 it is absolutely essential to be
aknowlegeable
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knowledgeable
a knowledgeable
 who lived in
this
 building before. On top of that, new landlords need to know if any bad things didn't happen in their nook.
Finally
, if it turns out that previous owners were famous or powerful people , the current ones will be able to ask a double price for the
house
 if they decide to sell it in future. The fastest way to find out the history of a building is
an
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 estate agent. They are supposed to know all information about the proper they sell.
However
, the estate agent is not a reliable source as they can hide the dark history of the
house
 in order to sell it. On another hand, the best way to get valid information is
permanent
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 residents who have been living in the neighbourhood for a long time.
Furthermore
, local libraries might store the necessary information about the past of an exact building. In conclusion, there are a lot of reasons why people are eager to have the detailed past of
a
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house
 where they live.
Moreover
, it is rather easy to get
this
 data from different resources nowadays
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