In schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts, while boys like science. what are the reasons for this trend and do you think this tendency should be changed?
it is assumed that
gender
is the main factor that affects subject-studying tendency in education. This
essay will look at some primary causes of this
and offer some assumptions about the change of this
trend.
there are a number of reasons for believing girls like art activities while
boys choose scientific subjects
. the first reason is differences in genetic, hormonal and biological effects. For instance
, males tend to be more assertive and competitive, so they are more likely to choose subjects
that are challenging such
as physics or technology. Females, by contrast
, are more expressive and intuitive and that results in their tendency to favour subjects
that give them the chance to express their thoughts and develop their imagination and creativity. Another reason that contributes to that tendency is parental guidance. Children learn about gender
stereotypes and roles from their parents at an early age. for example
, parents often give their sons a car or hero to play with, while
dolls are the best toys for young daughters. these gender
-segregated activities, as a result
, lead to differences in subject selection in school.
Although
the above trend seems to be natural and inevitable, I believe that it would be better for all students to choose the subjects
that they have an interest in, regardless of their gender
. gender
should be irrelevant in education and both sexes should be given equal education opportunities. Schoolgirls should be allowed to access subjects
that are considered male-dominated such
as science and vice versa. all of this
action will do wonders for both genders, where they can show and expand themselves in all aspects in which they are passionate.
In conclusion, there are various factors leading to subject selection in both girls and boys, but in some aspects, I somehow think this
trend should be adjusted and included
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include
gender
equality considerations.Submitted by bengocbaby9 on
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