The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram illustrates how the southwest airport will look after development
next
year. From an overall perspective, it is evident that it will be expanded and establish new facilities, which are more convenient for passengers. Looking at the plans in more detail, we can see there have 8 gates in a rectangle range and needs to walk with feet now.
Besides
, one coffee shop and a check-in counter are at the corner of the departure. After development, the security passport control and passport control customs are in the same place.
However
, the number of gates has increased to 18 and
also
have the sky train, which people don't need to walk by themself.
Moreover
, there have some new shops between the place that enter the aeroplanes and security passport control.
Furthermore
, both departures and arrivals have one cafe store, and
also
add the bag drop and ATM beside. The
last
, the most considerate planning is the car hire, which is near the new
enter
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doors.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • terminal
  • runway
  • refurbishment
  • redevelopment
  • amenities
  • car park
  • hangar
  • concourse
  • public transport hub
  • access roads
  • boarding gates
  • check-in desk
  • baggage claim
  • departure lounge
  • observation deck
  • duty-free shopping
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